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Friday, September 28, 2012

Travel Agencies

Travel agencies is a service that provides the various aspect of holiday into a package. The travel agens displaying packages of tour to the public. it's the way of tour travels to get customers. The operators of Travel agencies are active in making local tour programs and arrange for bookings on behalf of the customers at hotels, airlines, surface transport etc. The tour operators gets discounts for the package that he sell from various sources like airlines, hotels, etc, so they can sell it for a low prices. travel agents get their revenue from commisions from the tour operators, hotels, surface transporters, etc. Travel agent business is easy to establish. therefore, it's easy to find a travel agent. The important aspect of travel agency business is to be as close to the public.

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  2. I think the word "agens" in line 2 is wrong, the correct one is "agents".Also in line 6 "travel" should be "Travel" ( "T" capital).
    thanks

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  3. meita,, please use capitalization after (.)
    thank you.

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  4. On the first line,
    "Travel Agencies is..." = "Travel Agencies are...".
    But it would be better if you use words "Travel Agency" to explain what the travel agency is generally.

    On second line,
    agens = agents,
    displaying = display

    On fifth line,
    "The tour operators gets". Gets = Get
    "that he sell". He = They
    "a low prices". Prices = Price

    On sixth line
    "get their revenue from commisions from the tour operators..."

    make a simple one,
    "get their commisions from the tour operators..."

    Kiki is right. Please use capitalization after using (.)

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  5. Travel agency is a service that provides the various aspect of holiday into a package. The travel agents display packages of tour to the public. it's the way of tour travels to get their customers. The operators of travel agencies are active in making local tour programs and arrange for bookings on behalf of the customers at hotels, airlines, surface transport, and etc. The tour operators get discounts for the packages that they sell from various sources like airlines, hotels, and others. So, they can sell it for a low price. Travel agents get their revenue from commisions of the tour operators, hotels, surface transporters, etc. Travel agent business is easy to establish. Therefore, it's easy to find a travel agent. The important aspect of travel agency business is to be as close as posssible to the public.

    in my opinion, that one is better than veronica's paragraph because i've already recorrect some words, phrases, and sentences that i think wrong.
    thank you.

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