Travel agencies is a service
that provides the various aspect of holiday into a package. The travel
agens displaying packages of tour to the public. it's the way of tour
travels to get customers. The operators of Travel agencies are active in
making local tour programs and arrange for bookings on behalf of the
customers at hotels, airlines, surface transport etc. The tour operators
gets discounts for the package that he sell from various sources like
airlines, hotels, etc, so they can sell it for a low prices. travel
agents get their revenue from commisions from the tour operators,
hotels, surface transporters, etc. Travel
agent business is easy to establish. therefore, it's easy to find a
travel agent. The important aspect of travel agency business is to be as
close to the public.
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ReplyDeleteI think the word "agens" in line 2 is wrong, the correct one is "agents".Also in line 6 "travel" should be "Travel" ( "T" capital).
ReplyDeletethanks
meita,, please use capitalization after (.)
ReplyDeletethank you.
On the first line,
ReplyDelete"Travel Agencies is..." = "Travel Agencies are...".
But it would be better if you use words "Travel Agency" to explain what the travel agency is generally.
On second line,
agens = agents,
displaying = display
On fifth line,
"The tour operators gets". Gets = Get
"that he sell". He = They
"a low prices". Prices = Price
On sixth line
"get their revenue from commisions from the tour operators..."
make a simple one,
"get their commisions from the tour operators..."
Kiki is right. Please use capitalization after using (.)
Travel agency is a service that provides the various aspect of holiday into a package. The travel agents display packages of tour to the public. it's the way of tour travels to get their customers. The operators of travel agencies are active in making local tour programs and arrange for bookings on behalf of the customers at hotels, airlines, surface transport, and etc. The tour operators get discounts for the packages that they sell from various sources like airlines, hotels, and others. So, they can sell it for a low price. Travel agents get their revenue from commisions of the tour operators, hotels, surface transporters, etc. Travel agent business is easy to establish. Therefore, it's easy to find a travel agent. The important aspect of travel agency business is to be as close as posssible to the public.
ReplyDeletein my opinion, that one is better than veronica's paragraph because i've already recorrect some words, phrases, and sentences that i think wrong.
thank you.